Interpretive Essay Rewrite 

Paper details:

I would greatly appreciate a rewrite for this essay to potentially improve it from B to A, and extend the essay from 4 pages to 5 pages. The essay I am analyzing is Baca’s “Coming into language”. It is attached to Materials. along with my “Essay_needEdit”, “Evaluation Rubric”, “prompt” and some “sample essay”. Please let me know if there is any confusion.